Thursday, January 6, 2011

Super Cool's World!

The second entry of the Dimensia journal.

SUPER COOL'S WORLD!

This is the first world we journeyed to (excluding our world). We ran into Markal, who was being bullied by some odd characters. When we arrived, Markal opened another portal and lept in. Before we lept in after him, the bald guy stopped us and said to take the whacked-out Super Cool with us.*

Those guys were telling me to 'stop campaigning for the evil mayor' for some reason.
-Super Cool

I cannot picture in my head why they would do such a thing.
-Sir Jay of the Blue Clan

They were big meanie-heds!
-Jarvis

Shouldn't this be the first entry?
-Marshall**

Well, since we didn't get the journal until after*** we left this dimension, I'd say the world we got it on would come first, being in recent memory.
-Jarvis

(You wrote all that?)**** Regardless, it was the first world we went to, so it should be the first entry!
-Marshall

Are you saying that my world is less important, Master Marshall?
Sir Jay of the Blue Clan

(Sir Jay, you forgot to hyphen your name.)
-Jarvis
(Oh, my apologies.) *-Sir Jay of the Blue Clan
-Sir Jay of the Blue Clan

...This is getting ridiculous. I'm out.
-Marshall

Marshall's such a quitter.
-Jarvis

I concur, quite the coward.
-Sir Jay of the Blue Clan

Anyway, back to my world...
-Super Cool

I'm bored. Let's close this entry.
-Jarvis

Yes, I too grow uninterested. Let us retire.
-Sir Jay of the Blue Clan

...Alright.
-Super Cool

*I have since retconned this. It now shows Super Cool being assaulted by the "bullies" (known as the Tea Guys) while Markal watches from a distance.
**Still in cursive and always will be.
***Anything you see that is italicized is underlined in the text.
****Marshal doesn't give Jarvis enough credit.

3 comments:

AubrieAnne said...

Ha! I like how you throw in old lines like "Yes, I too grow uninterested. Let us retire." It's very much a part of your style. Sometimes I wish people still talked like that.

I'm also starting to see how some of this comes together. It's working so far, although this is just kind of jumping into it so I was a little lost, but I get it.

Matt Dimitroff said...

If you're interested in a full diagnostic, I'd be glad to accommodate. But I think the journals give a nice teaser. ;)

AubrieAnne said...

No, I agree. The teasers are nice.